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-  This project is a operating system running on computer which is in X86_ 64 Architecture . The DragonOS is currently under development!
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+  DragonOS is an operating system running on the X86_64 Architecture. This project is currently under development!
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[All you want to know about DragonOS is here - DragonOS](https://dragonos.org/uncategorized/summary/)
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## How to run?
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-  The steps to run DragonOS are very simple. You can refer to the following materials to run DragonOS in the shortest 15 minutes!
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+  The steps to run DragonOS are very simple. You can refer to the following information to run DragonOS within 15 minutes at the fastest!
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- [Building DragonOS - DragonOS dev document](https://docs.dragonos.org/zh_CN/latest/introduction/build_system.html#docker)
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## How to join DragonOS ?
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-  If you are willing to join us, you can check the project panel of GitHub warehouse, select the recently planned functions, and improve them.
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+  If you are willing to join us, you can check the project panel of the GitHub repo, select the recently planned functions, and improve them.
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-  Or, you can also bring your ideas and ideas, discuss with the community partners, and create some new functions for dragonos.
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+  Or, you can also bring your ideas, discuss with community members, and create some new functions for DragonOS.
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-## How to come in contact with the community?
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+## How to contact the community?
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  You can send me an email. My email address is[ [email protected] ](mailto: [email protected] )。
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Satin Wuker